I got a lot of help with the first draft of this MMA promo when I posted it here and on various MMA websites.
http://forums.dvdoctor.net/showthread.php?t=44105
It was generally considered too long and too slow, and I agreed. Here is the new version, completely re-edited with new music and voice-over. It is much higher energy and only a minute long.
Check it out on my blog, here...
http://mikepulcinella.com/whatsnew.htm
Thanks,
Mike
its good. I like it. for me its abit to American but I'm not American and no nothing about this sport so ignore me
its good. I like it. for me its abit to American but I'm not American and no nothing about this sport so ignore me
Thanks for your reply. I don't want to ignore you!! LOL!
What about it is "American"? What does that mean?
Hi MIke - 10 times better! - This is terrific now and really gets your message across.
I can't see the "American" feel about it though. Change the language and titles and it could be promoting the sport in any country.