MMA promo completely revised!

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Mike Pulcinella
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I got a lot of help with the first draft of this MMA promo when I posted it here and on various MMA websites.

http://forums.dvdoctor.net/showthread.php?t=44105

It was generally considered too long and too slow, and I agreed. Here is the new version, completely re-edited with new music and voice-over. It is much higher energy and only a minute long.

Check it out on my blog, here...

http://mikepulcinella.com/whatsnew.htm

Thanks,
Mike

stoo
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Joined: May 28 2001

its good. I like it. for me its abit to American but I'm not American and no nothing about this sport so ignore me

Mike Pulcinella
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stoo wrote:
its good. I like it. for me its abit to American but I'm not American and no nothing about this sport so ignore me

Thanks for your reply. I don't want to ignore you!! LOL!

What about it is "American"? What does that mean?

branny
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Joined: Nov 6 2001

Hi MIke - 10 times better! - This is terrific now and really gets your message across.
I can't see the "American" feel about it though. Change the language and titles and it could be promoting the sport in any country.

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