Wedding Clip for review...

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Flame1
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A montage of shots from our recent wedding:)

Any comments appreciated....he says in embarrasment:o looking down the reviews list!

Cheers,

Flame.

up_north
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Excellent - if ever I get to that level I'll be a happy chappy.

I thought there was maybe just a bit too much of the glow/ray type effect and that reflection at 1:38ish was just weird.

'Iris' is a great song to edit to and I think that was editied perfectly to it. It's also an easy song to cut a verse out of when you realise you don't have enough footage....as in my curredt edit!

Ian

branny
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Nice mix of shots there Jon. I even had the music on as well. Graduated Filter effect works well as did the 'reflection trick'.
Filmed at your fav venue last week upnorth. Allerton Castle :). Even dimmer light than normal.
I'll post a clip if I find time.

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Tony7
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Excellent :)

Tony.
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Flame1
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Thx for the comments, I wanted that particular clip to be weird! so it must have worked!:)

Cheers,

Flame.

Z Cheema
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Flame can you Pm me your landline number for my records, only have your mob

Flame1
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Hi Z,

Will do, are yo going to tell me all the bad things everyone said about my entry at your meeting?:D

I managed to attend our area and it was extremely interesting to say the least!!!!

Cheers:)

Flame

Z Cheema
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Yours got of lightly, apart from the light rays......

The number was just for the odd chat.....

Flame1
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Hi Z:)

Thx for that.

Look forward to catching up soon.

Cheers,

Flame.

Mike Pulcinella
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I'm too slow. I missed it!

Flame1
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Hi Mike,

No worries:) , hope you can help, I have two versions of almost identical clips. Need some help, advice, as to which one to use for web. If you or anyone else can help, would be much appreciated.

This one: http://www.derienzo-videoproductions.co.uk/jaco.wmv

or this one: http://www.derienzo-videoproductions.co.uk/jaco1.wmv

:confused: :confused: :confused:

p.s. my wife said the first clip, but she's always wrong.........don't tell her I said that:o

Cheers,

Flame.

Pete Allen
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I'd listen to your wife John, I think the ladies would be more impressed with No1.

I drink to steady my nerves. Last night I got so steady I couldn't move. Wedding video essex

Flame1
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Thx Pete:)

And she's told me off for using the rays so she must be right!:D

Any one got a magic tablet to stop this ray addiction.....:)

Cheers,

Flame.

Mike Pulcinella
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Those aren't wedding videos! They look like movies! Flame, you are an artist! There is none of the awkwardness that accompanies many wedding clips. The editing is smooth and your choice of clips is impeccable! Every smile is natural and unforced. Bravo!

Having gushed a bit, I would say I preferred the first version. I found it a bit more consistent throughout. Either one would be fine, but I like the first. Tell your wife she's not always wrong!!

branny
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Flame1 wrote:
Any one got a magic tablet to stop this ray addiction.....:)
Flame.

For ray addiction read 'pull focus/hosepipe/tilt/pan/steadicam shot'
In moderation, 'wow! Every 20 seconds, yawn.
We all get over enthusiastic with new tricks. It'll pass Jon :)

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Flame1
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Hi Mike, Thx for taking the time out to review both clips, extremely appreciated and for your comments......still striving to improve like us all...

Branny, just gone out and bought a book called 'The nerds guide to light rays and their effects'

Cheers:D