All in all I quite liked that apart from the speeded up shots. Not sure they worked. Just my opinion though
Speeded up shots worked well for me - just goes to show it's a personal thing.
Thought it was great - would love to see a version with fewer cuts - may suit the leisurely pace of the music and subject matter - just to compare.
Thank you for your comments and taking the time to look:)
Cheers,
Flame.
I pretty much liked it all John, apart from a couple of very similar or repeated shots, which did not move the 'story along' as I would have liked. The speed changes worked for me as well as the pace and cutting... but try to get your other half to apply fresh nail varnish before the shoot next time as the chipped (or bitten) nail distracted me a bit :) Nice grading too. Good Effort... :D
Thx Steve.
Flame.
I thought it was great and reminded me of some French New Wave films. Your editing to the music was great and flowed nicely with the majority of shots.
My only criticism would have been the two ramp shots near the end. I felt it didn't match the mood of the other footage - just my thoughts.
Thx bluesproggit for your comments.:)
Cheers,
Flame.