Just had a brief look at this and though the audio seems nice and clear, the relentless cuts to other, wobbly cams is one of my pet hates. You had some nice head shots going on that would have made a far stronger video if these had been left on screen longer. Why the obsession for constant cutting to another cam every few seconds? It just doesn't work (for an editor that is), though I'm sure the band and friends love it, it's lacking some polish.
Thanks for taking the time out of your busy day to share your constructive critisism of the clip. I wasn't just looking for praise, but genuine feedback of how it looked to a wider audience.
You're welcome!! Lol
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