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impact
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I have posted these before but would just like some fresh feedback if you have not seen them before. Please bare in mind that I have no that i am not a pro and have learnt all I know from the net and mags. Anyway lets get on wit it, I think these new posts are great. By the way purple one of my wifes work mates has booked you way cool I can watch you all day and learn.

http://www.sitesled.com/members/impact-imagez-uk/images/pages/johnsintro.htm

http://media.putfile.com/downfall

tom hardwick
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Good, you might man the other camera for me.

tom hardwick
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Good little film, full of imaginative tweaks and I bet they love it. The transitions are not for me (especially the opening hard-edged circle) but it's all a matter of personal taste. The straight dissolve just works so well with slo-mo and the 'dotty wipe' just calls attention to itself (for me). I liked the b & w to colour, the juxtapositioning of the stills and the audio mixing - good clear vows you've recorded. Well done.

impact
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Good, you might man the other camera for me.

im confused mate?

nash
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Ok,
First of all downfall won't play for some reason.

As for Johnsintro:-

Pros:
Good music and transition choices. nice B&W to colour transition

Cons:
Not good vow choice, B&W to colour backward and forward confuses, shot composition may work better if you mix the framing up. For example the shot of (I assume) the mother in the hat with her two sons for me would work better as a medium or medium close shot. It was an intimate moment and the closer framing would have made made it feel intimate rather then voyeuristic, if you see what I mean. The final shot with bride towering above the groom, again for me felt wrong as it made the bride look Amazonian as appose to dimure.

But what do I know! Well done for posting.

I'd like to see Downfall, so let me know If it's only me that can't see it and I will try again.

Regards..............Neil

Neil Ashcroft
Fastroc is Media in Motion
http://www.fastroc.co.uk
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David L Lewis
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Downfall didnt work for me either

David L Lewis

Hello I'm in Mensa, Is there anything you would like me to explain to you?

Anonymous

Hi Impact

What are their names?

impact
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thank you

thanks for all your comments, the down fall vid has a problem I will sort that. How does one get paid for wedding work as I have 6 more wediings to do, one in costa del sol. I do all work for free but its getting a little hard doing weddings christenings anniversaries parties conversions etc for free plus a 9-5 job and family plus d.i.y.

impact
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My wife tells me her name is holly williamson

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impact wrote:
My wife tells me her name is holly williamson

Doesn't seem to be us - we don't have a Holly Williamson booked - could be under a different name if someone else (mother, sister) has booked, but generally we'd still have the name of the bride on file.

What's the date of the wedding?

impact
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dont know mate, but I only way I have this info is becaused i wanted to do the wedding but dont do music style weddings, so i asked her to give me the site address of who she is using and it come up with the pirate vid.

impact
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she gave me the link to the pirate clip thats how i found your site

tom hardwick
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Impact - do you also do charity work in your spare time? When all these people approach you for your videography services, why don't you present them with a simple price list?

impact
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video link

here the downfall link again hope this works

http://media.putfile.com/over-now27

impact
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funny you should say charity work, I work for a high street bank and commuty work is part of our performance plan

Ray Maher
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impact wrote:
here the downfall link again hope this works

http://media.putfile.com/over-now27

All I get is the plugin did not initialize.

Ray Maher