Hi,
I have entered a mockumentary in shootingpeople's film of the month competition and was wondering if there are any members of shootingpeople on here that wouldn't mind watching it and rating it? You have to be a member to do so unfortunately.
Here is the link:
http://shootingpeople.org/watch/film.php?film_id=76544
It's a different angle on internet dating.
Feedback would be great too if you have the time.
Cheers.
2 sec.... Weirdo in a blond wig applying makeup....Urge to switch off.
8 sec....Dead boring..switched off.
Cheers.
I now seem to spend a lot of time arguing with inanimate objects
Thanks for the constructive comments.
Not entertaining at all....
There is such a thing as entertainment and rubbish. I think you know what category we can put that in.
Try and be a bit more adventures in you project besides "You Know What"
Well it left me confused. From our point of view, as in production, it seemed to break all the usual rules about composition, movement, zoom etc, and from the performance perspective it was extremely boring and not funny - or was this the point. The actors needed severe direction and it was just weird?
I stuck with it for a full 2mins. My 2P; The jump cuts and the zooms need to be more extreme to get the effect that I think you're trying to achieve. The 1 camera angle isn't doing you any favours. Bottom line is, it just ain't funny.
I think we can keep adding comments, in general he knows it is no good. Too keep giving him advice, is the wrong material to be constructive.